萍附青蓮浮幻夢,秋隨紅雨掃餘痕。何如?所謂對偶,是詞性的一致,也就是名詞對名詞,形容詞對形容詞,動詞對動詞。。。
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謝謝一劍版主 wonderful suggestion, I will update right away.
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謝謝一劍版主, for your comment and it is beatiful now. Happy New Year!
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