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• ---- 附上律詩校驗報告, 歡迎指點 and comment. -Meander001- ♂ (116 bytes) () 12/25/2016 postreply 20:17:58
• 讚好詩! -Willie_USA- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/26/2016 postreply 01:46:35
• ----謝謝 Willie, 祝節日快樂! -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/26/2016 postreply 03:16:15
• 讚好詩!中兩聯的對偶下點功夫會更好! -一劍天涯- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/26/2016 postreply 05:29:35
• ----謝謝, 一劍版主 , 祝節日快樂! -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/26/2016 postreply 05:56:52