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K城雨水少,夏日炎炎盼清涼世界。作詩一首:
祈雨 (中華新韻 七律仄起六豪)
夏日熏風遲未了 禪房默禱趺中宵
晴空何處沾雲跡 微雨幾曾吻樹梢
前院老貓懷寂寞 荷塘長股喚同僚
願吾乞取天河水 沐浴蒼生洗舊袍
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結得韻長!
-一劍天涯-
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好詩,最後兩句絕了。
-Once-always-
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12/20/2016 postreply
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讚!
-北極湖-
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12/20/2016 postreply
08:20:52
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結句很讚!!
-荷花清香-
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