原創英詩：you gotta be patient to be a patient aabbccddeeffgghhii

Right after my dentist appointment,

my tooth seemed to need a new treatment.

it hurt so bad and I felt like death,

I moaned and took  many a deep breath,

 trying to get the tooth pain down,

 in vain. I called my dentist in town.

  but "the office is now closed", I was told,

  I had no choice but to take a tylenol.

   It didn't work, then I tried some ice,

   but the result turned out not so nice.

  the terrible ache was not relieved.

   I have to go to the hospital, I belived.

   I waited in the hosptial waiting room

   where people were in torment and gloom.

    I waited there for 3 hours and a half,

    without getting any help from the staff!

    They say that  you  gotta be patient

     to be a patient. Too bad, I left, impatient.

 

Dec. 18, 2016  (記去年牙痛去醫院的事情  Based on a real life experience.)

 

 

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• You gotta be patient to be a patient. :) like it! -Once-always- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/18/2016 postreply 08:48:28

• Thanks a lot Once! :) I am happy that you like it. Greetings~ -小貝殼weed- ♀ (199 bytes) () 12/18/2016 postreply 10:13:55

• Lol, 吃糖太多了？ -作業本- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/18/2016 postreply 13:11:54

• 謝Once, 一塵兄，作君點讚，留言！ 是的，壞習慣。萬聖節積累下來幾麻袋的糖。。。 -小貝殼weed- ♀ (436 bytes) () 12/18/2016 postreply 13:43:07

• too bad I left impatient.... 欣賞 -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/18/2016 postreply 14:42:14

• 謝一畝詩人讚賞！ 問好～ -小貝殼weed- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/18/2016 postreply 18:17:14

• 第十四行修改了一下。多謝各位閱讀和點讚，鼓勵！ -小貝殼weed- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/19/2016 postreply 03:45:49