潛兄好律!首聯有氣勢,中間很瀟灑,(尤喜醬春鵪),末尾通達!非常喜歡!
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• 多謝作業兄鼓勵!哈哈,俺本來想寫火車上吃扒雞的事,雞入韻很難。幸虧十五刪裏有個鵪韻。就用它充數哈。再謝作業兄賞評。 -潛東籬- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/05/2016 postreply 13:31:44
• 多謝作業兄鼓勵!哈哈,俺本來想寫火車上吃扒雞的事,雞入韻很難。幸虧十五刪裏有個鵪韻。就用它充數哈。再謝作業兄賞評。 -潛東籬- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/05/2016 postreply 13:31:44
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