疏闊好律!”盡斂寒陰濕積埃“ - ”寒陰濕“意象重複,”積“字用得似不到位。”也離開“ - 似太俗白。”載“仄,”裁“?
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• 謝清泉兄賞讀,“濕”不是形容詞,乃動詞。“載”typo,當為“栽”,未老眼先花 -fox25- ♂ (234 bytes) () 10/12/2016 postreply 09:03:06
• 對不起,斷句有誤! -清泉水- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/12/2016 postreply 19:48:42
• 謝清泉兄賞讀,“濕”不是形容詞,乃動詞。“載”typo,當為“栽”,未老眼先花 -fox25- ♂ (234 bytes) () 10/12/2016 postreply 09:03:06
• 對不起,斷句有誤! -清泉水- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/12/2016 postreply 19:48:42
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