塑成不留名,
難成揚萬裏。
小技可雕蟲,
大藝仍傷身。
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謝謝朋友賞讀拙作和同吟。朋友的詩很自由,但如果作近體詩加上一些格律會更上口,個見。
-作業本-
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09/28/2016 postreply
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讀下我昨天作新詩“無歸”
-胡華泠-
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