改得好, 完全接受。大謝青泉老師。
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• 原詩結句最好!現三句改後,三四句接得綿密,就更好了!讚! -曲未平- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/11/2016 postreply 10:35:58
• 謝謝曲老師 -我要學詩詞- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/11/2016 postreply 16:07:38
• 原詩結句最好!現三句改後,三四句接得綿密,就更好了!讚! -曲未平- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/11/2016 postreply 10:35:58
• 謝謝曲老師 -我要學詩詞- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/11/2016 postreply 16:07:38
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