全詩結構緊湊,有景有情,不錯。一點個見:首句若將成語去掉自造一句或更好。
頷聯對仗不太工整,若是古體,不用介意。
後麵甚好。
全詩結構緊湊,有景有情,不錯。一點個見:首句若將成語去掉自造一句或更好。
頷聯對仗不太工整,若是古體,不用介意。
後麵甚好。
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