You are My Unique

 

There are many stars in the sky.

You are the brightest one in my eyes.

 

There are many flowers in the field.

You are the most beautiful one I want to hold.

 

There are many people in the world.

You are the one I love with my mind and my soul.

 

I want to dance with you all the night.

I want to smile at you all the time.

 

My heart flips when I am apart from you.

My chest aches when I am missing you.

 

You are my darling dear.

You are the unique one in my heart, deep there.

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• 替誰誰寫給 相看不厭 ~~~ -elzevir- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2016 postreply 17:58:43

• 寫得太好了！替誰誰誰？ -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2016 postreply 22:12:46

• 一兄也來一個？ -相看不厭- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2016 postreply 23:42:33

• 謝謝鼓勵！ -elzevir- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/04/2016 postreply 05:05:28

• 佩服！！！ -北極湖- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2016 postreply 18:15:30

• 謝謝！ -elzevir- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/04/2016 postreply 05:04:47

• 您太會寫了，寫的太好了，萬分感謝，情人節禮物有了, ~ -相看不厭- ♂ (511 bytes) () 08/03/2016 postreply 18:55:01

• 你的命題好，容易寫。就試了試。 -elzevir- ♀ (72 bytes) () 08/04/2016 postreply 05:03:58

• 很棒！學習了！ -潛東籬- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/04/2016 postreply 08:12:15

• 謝謝臨帖鼓勵！ -elzevir- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/04/2016 postreply 11:02:59

• 非常欣賞， 簡潔明暢。又注意到韻腳，難能可貴。就是第三節world 和love 韻似差遠了點。是否可改成這樣…… -曲未平- ♂ (965 bytes) () 08/04/2016 postreply 09:14:41

• 謝謝曲師點評和建議。改成You are the one I love with my mind and my soul. -elzevir- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/04/2016 postreply 11:01:17

• What about ~ -相看不厭- ♂ (624 bytes) () 08/04/2016 postreply 11:14:53

• 也很好！很 generous ! -elzevir- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/05/2016 postreply 05:46:12