I Love You, Summer
Rhyming scheme 押韻格律: abba cddc effe gg 多謝不吝賜教!
Twenty degrees Celsius here, no complain,
You can enjoy yourself on the cool sand,
While it is so hot somewhere in the inland,
that you can cook eggs on the top of a train.
In the woods, chickadees pleasantly sing,
happy as the happy face of the sun.
kids bike, run, laugh, having lots of fun,
in summer, you can do many a thing:
Gardening, barbecue, camping, chasing deer,
but not all the time using the internet.
if possible, tour around the planet,
if not, go to the farmer's market that's near.
oh, I love summer, your days and nights,
and wish my friends a good time with delights!
二十攝氏度,真的無話好說了,
當內陸的一些地方非常的熱,
熱得你可以在火車頂上煮雞蛋,
而你可以在這裏涼快的沙灘上享受。
樹林裏的山雀在愉快地歌唱,
開心得就如太陽快樂的笑臉。
小孩子們騎車,追跑,笑鬧,樂趣多多,
夏日裏,你能做的事情真不少呢:
園藝,燒烤,野營,逐鹿,
而不是全天候地上網。
如果有可能,還可以去環遊世界,
要不然,去附近的農民市場逛逛也好。
哦,我愛夏日,你的日日夜夜,
也祝福我的朋友們夏安萬福!
作者:小貝殼 August 3, 2016
試寫十四行詩: I Love You, Summer (中英雙語)
所有跟帖:
• 太長,就用你的文字精簡一下 -歸來探梅- ♂ (155 bytes) () 08/03/2016 postreply 07:14:52
• thanks, you made my day. 謝謝您!好逗,哈哈哈! -小貝殼weed- ♀ (169 bytes) () 08/03/2016 postreply 10:22:30
• 建議慢點來 -yuanxiang- ♂ (23 bytes) () 08/03/2016 postreply 07:20:48
• 多謝元老師指正! 夏安!~ -小貝殼weed- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2016 postreply 10:23:27
• 我覺得總體還是很好的。中英雙語都這麽好,不容易。 -yuanxiang- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2016 postreply 10:28:37