不錯，

Louyang's powerful poet----god's works
inflames his reader's hearts with his words.
Potent and just, a pen so rare,
filling the sky with healthy, fresh air.

 

句子順序改動一下：

Luoyang's powerful poet inflames 

His readers' hearts with words,

Potent and just , like god's works so rare

Filling the sky with healthy, fresh air.

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• 多謝元老師雅正，次序很重要嗎？ -小貝殼weed- ♀ (266 bytes) () 07/31/2016 postreply 07:48:15