湖兄後兩句構思甚好!張旭這首七絕,寫得不夠凝練,使得兄有了可乘之機。白居易將“七言欲減為五言而不得,方好。”
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• 深謝【留】兄美言。點評甚中肯。不才也是在讀【草聖】此詩咀嚼其味時,覺得可嚐試做成五絕。但毫無褻瀆古聖賢之意。如有冒犯,懇請理解在 -湖墅STL- ♂ (500 bytes) () 07/02/2016 postreply 20:10:40
• 深謝【留】兄美言。點評甚中肯。不才也是在讀【草聖】此詩咀嚼其味時,覺得可嚐試做成五絕。但毫無褻瀆古聖賢之意。如有冒犯,懇請理解在 -湖墅STL- ♂ (500 bytes) () 07/02/2016 postreply 20:10:40
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