試意譯再創作弗羅斯特原野 Desert Places by Robert Frost (和一畝兄學習）：））））

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Desert Places
原野
by Robert Frost 弗羅斯特

Snow falling and night falling fast, oh, fast
In a field I looked into going past,
And the ground almost covered smooth in snow,
But a few weeds and stubble showing last.

雪輕輕的飄落

夜幕卻驀然沉降，沉降
我在原野上回望
土地被白茫茫的大雪覆蓋平整
偶爾看見一兩叢枯萎的野草花

The woods around it have it--it is theirs.
All animals are smothered in their lairs.
I am too absent-spirited to count;
The loneliness includes me unawares.

遠方環繞的林木緊擁著荒原

荒原屬於他們

那靜靜被白雪覆蓋了巢穴酣睡的動物們

我像一縷若無的遊息

孤寂使我迷失

And lonely as it is that loneliness
Will be more lonely ere it will be less--
A blanker whiteness of benighted snow
With no expression, nothing to express.

孤獨本身就像那永恒的寂寞
永遠都不會改變分毫
白茫茫夜幕下的雪野呀
哪裏我可以聽見一點點聲音哪怕隻有一點點？

They cannot scare me with their empty spaces
Between stars--on stars where no human race is.
I have it in me so much nearer home
To scare myself with my own desert places.

不用說那遙遠宇宙

星於星之間杳無人煙的荒漠空間會嚇住我

其實就在我的家園在內心裏

我早已被一片無盡的荒漠

震懾

。。。

Desert Places （舊版）
原野
by Robert Frost 弗羅斯特

Snow falling and night falling fast, oh, fast
In a field I looked into going past,
And the ground almost covered smooth in snow,
But a few weeds and stubble showing last.

雪輕輕的飄落夜幕卻驀然沉降，沉降
我在廣袤的原野上回望
土地被白茫茫的大雪覆蓋
偶爾一兩叢枯萎的野草花在風中瑟索

The woods around it have it--it is theirs.
All animals are smothered in their lairs.
I am too absent-spirited to count;
The loneliness includes me unawares.

遠方環繞的林木緊緊擁著荒原

荒原屬於他們

那靜靜被白雪覆蓋了巢穴酣睡的動物們

我像一縷若無的遊息

孤寂使我漸漸開始迷失

遠方環繞著森森的樹林肅穆的佇立陷入忘我的冥思（舊版）
動物們仿佛窒息在他們的巢穴裏
我像一縷若無的遊息在遼闊的天地間逡巡
莫大的孤寂籠罩著四野我漸漸開始迷失

And lonely as it is that loneliness
Will be more lonely ere it will be less--
A blanker whiteness of benighted snow
With no expression, nothing to express.

孤獨本身就像那永恒的寂寞
永遠永遠都不會改變分毫
白茫茫夜幕下的雪野呀
哪裏我可以聽見一點點聲音哪怕隻有一點點？

They cannot scare me with their empty spaces
Between stars--on stars where no human race is.
I have it in me so much nearer home
To scare myself with my own desert places.

不必再用那遙遠廣袤宇宙

那星於星之間杳無人煙的荒漠空間來嚇我

其實那就在我的家園在我的自心裏

我早已驚懼地陷入了一個巨大的落寞空間

舉步唯艱

。。。

(舊版）

永遠不要想用那空寂沉默的荒野嚇唬我
在那浩瀚杳無人煙的廣宇那星星璀璨出沒的地方
我將歸向那裏那裏是我最甜蜜的家園
我會被那屬於我自己的廣袤原野徹底征服

：））））

【荒野】by 弗羅斯特

來源: Yimusanfendi

Desert Places

荒野

by Robert Frost

雪下得好快夜降得好快，噢，好快，
在這野外，我看著的、走過的野外，
而這地麵幾乎都被雪平滑地覆蓋，
隻有些野草和殘枝在作最後的搖擺。

環繞它的林木擁有它—它屬它們。
所有的動物都被堵塞在他們的洞穴。
我太缺乏精力，以致我無法細數；
這孤獨包括了我，我竟沒有感覺。

且它是孤獨的，它仿佛是那種孤獨
在它變少之前，它會更加孤獨
那夜幕籠罩下的雪披著空洞的雪白
沒有表情，沒有什麽東西需要表述。

他們不能用他們空的空間嚇唬我
星星之間、星星之上沒有人類的種族
離家更近在我裏麵我有那麽多孤獨
用我內在的荒野來使我自己驚懼。

Snow falling and night falling fast, oh, fast
In a field I looked into going past,
And the ground almost covered smooth in snow,
But a few weeds and stubble showing last.

The woods around it have it--it is theirs.
All animals are smothered in their lairs.
I am too absent-spirited to count;
The loneliness includes me unawares.

And lonely as it is that loneliness
Will be more lonely ere it will be less--
A blanker whiteness of benighted snow
With no expression, nothing to express.

They cannot scare me with their empty spaces
Between stars--on stars where no human race is.
I have it in me so much nearer home
To scare myself with my own desert places.