You left me – Sire – two Legacies – (713) BY EMILY DICKINSON 翻譯

在讀 when breath becomes air， 後記引用了這首詩， 有誰知道中文的譯本嗎？ 謝謝。 我試一下， 丟塊磚頭。 

You left me – Sire – two Legacies – (713)

 

BY EMILY DICKINSON

 

You left me – Sire – two Legacies –

A Legacy of Love

A Heavenly Father would suffice

Had He the offer of –

 

You left me Boundaries of Pain –

Capacious as the Sea –

Between Eternity and Time –

Your Consciousness – and me –

 

馨柔的你, 遺留我, 兩重

一重不息的愛

若予天父

他亦感慨

 

一重無際的痛

似海般深廣

在恒瞬之間 

君心與我依傍

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