改去"山花錦簇"後, "原是臘梅相助"就沒了主體, 也要改. 再想想.
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• 謝【老來】評點及建議。改了第二句的意思後,整個詩的意境是:雪厚暮色重,林中迷了路, -湖墅STL- ♂ (295 bytes) () 01/29/2016 postreply 08:47:27
• 謝【老來】評點及建議。改了第二句的意思後,整個詩的意境是:雪厚暮色重,林中迷了路, -湖墅STL- ♂ (295 bytes) () 01/29/2016 postreply 08:47:27
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