最喜中兩聯,由眼下的江月浪舟到亙古千秋。視野心胸開闊豪大,
結句略弱些,若能蕩開,挖掘一下,則絕佳了,個見嗬。
最喜中兩聯,由眼下的江月浪舟到亙古千秋。視野心胸開闊豪大,
結句略弱些,若能蕩開,挖掘一下,則絕佳了,個見嗬。
• 尾聯是想和首聯相呼應,所以就這樣寫了。深謝相看兄鼓勵,點評全部記下了,問好! -寒硯- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/01/2015 postreply 12:21:32
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