因為她們有詠菊好詩,故建議以此作結,留點想象空間。
喜聞絕色東京到,姑嫂明朝盡綴頭。姑嫂妙詞誰與儔?個人覺得如結句落在人頭上,與出句大環境似不諧。
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• 深謝清泉兄再次臨帖指點!因為是次韻,原玉尾聯結在頭韻,不便改用他字。看來尾聯要重起爐灶,容俺再思!再謝清泉兄指點! -一劍天涯- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/26/2015 postreply 11:49:08
• 深謝清泉兄再次臨帖指點!因為是次韻,原玉尾聯結在頭韻,不便改用他字。看來尾聯要重起爐灶,容俺再思!再謝清泉兄指點! -一劍天涯- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/26/2015 postreply 11:49:08
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