Xianke兄好,這幾首的文字都很優美,但絕句要用平仄則讀起來更有味!比如第四首:
群芳開四季,
盛夏尤蒼蘢。
因曆熔爐煉,
花嬌色愈濃。
如果把“尤”改個仄音的字就更好了!
Xianke兄好,這幾首的文字都很優美,但絕句要用平仄則讀起來更有味!比如第四首:
群芳開四季,
盛夏尤蒼蘢。
因曆熔爐煉,
花嬌色愈濃。
如果把“尤”改個仄音的字就更好了!
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