大謝湘泉老師賜教!跟您有同感,我寫詞時也覺得四個“時”似乎不妥,但沒想到更好的改進辦法。我再仔細斟酌一下。下次要跟您學寫律詩了。
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• 改得好,喜歡! -湘泉- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2015 postreply 11:26:57
• 再謝賜教,祝新周愉快! -寒硯- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2015 postreply 11:33:11
• 改得好,喜歡! -湘泉- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2015 postreply 11:26:57
• 再謝賜教,祝新周愉快! -寒硯- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/03/2015 postreply 11:33:11
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