此調以柳詞為正體,讀來情趣清雅,聲韻揚宕、開合自然,深得柳永之味。隻是個別處應注意平仄與對偶。
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• 謝謝點評,美言不敢當。是按詞林正韻譜填的,也許哪兒還是疏忽了。關於對偶,看了八首前人作品,並不雷同, -曲未平- ♂ (180 bytes) () 07/27/2015 postreply 11:45:08
• 謝謝點評,美言不敢當。是按詞林正韻譜填的,也許哪兒還是疏忽了。關於對偶,看了八首前人作品,並不雷同, -曲未平- ♂ (180 bytes) () 07/27/2015 postreply 11:45:08
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