第一首改為“朗月一彎笑迎我”如何?
清泉兄好絕,每首都喜歡,問好!
所有跟帖:
• 寒硯好!深謝惠臨指正,今晨草就,忘了平仄,已經按照您的意見有所修改。 -清泉水- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/24/2015 postreply 14:27:46
• 清泉兄太客氣了,我跟您學到很多。您改得很好! -寒硯- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/24/2015 postreply 18:50:29
• 寒硯好!深謝惠臨指正,今晨草就,忘了平仄,已經按照您的意見有所修改。 -清泉水- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/24/2015 postreply 14:27:46
• 清泉兄太客氣了,我跟您學到很多。您改得很好! -寒硯- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/24/2015 postreply 18:50:29
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