離別--中英雙語版

致那黑暗的幾分鍾

我掉進了一個真空的漩渦，

想說話，卻喉頭緊鎖

我四肢僵硬，手足所措

你的影子愈來愈模糊

我想伸手拉住你

但是我的手臂力量全無

我的身體已被漩渦掏空

隻剩心頭的苦

我知道，我已經死去

我又被拋回到了這個世界

帶著一個支離破碎的夢

我在分離中死去

我在思念裏重生

然後我又用英文寫了一遍，略微改了幾個字，以便押韻：

To Those Darkest Few Minutes

I fell into a turbulent vacuum

I wanted to scream, but my throat was locked up

My limbs were stiff, I didn’t know what to do with this stuff

You were fading from my sight

I wanted to extend my arms to pull you tight

but I lost all my might

my body was sucked empty by the turbulence

and bitterness was the only permanence

I knew I was dead

I am thrown back into this world

with nothing but a stuttered nightmare

I just died with goodbye

and I am reborn into despair

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