+1 好看。結句可改否？

來源: 阿童木牧於 2015-04-26 08:50:41 [檔案] [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (0 bytes)

回答: 起，承，轉 - 一氣鋪開，景象闊大，惜結得弱一些，似太隨意。由清泉水於 2015-04-26 08:14:14

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