東君夜半搖新雪,櫻樹枝頭接落花。讚龍兄好句!阿童詩也好,就是最後一句還差欠一點。我一直想寫櫻花,一直寫不好。
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• 多謝曲師親臨指導,可否改為 清風一過千層雪,點點相思寄落花。 -阿童木牧- ♀ (6 bytes) () 03/22/2015 postreply 17:44:39
• 多謝曲師親臨指導,可否改為 清風一過千層雪,點點相思寄落花。 -阿童木牧- ♀ (6 bytes) () 03/22/2015 postreply 17:44:39
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