扣住揚州寫,很出彩,大讚!結句弱了點,能換一句嗎?
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• 被拉去工作一會兒,剛看到曲師的留言。大謝!曲師評的有道理。是得改! -石蝶- ♂ (291 bytes) () 03/07/2015 postreply 15:38:54
• 被拉去工作一會兒,剛看到曲師的留言。大謝!曲師評的有道理。是得改! -石蝶- ♂ (291 bytes) () 03/07/2015 postreply 15:38:54
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