豪氣十足,與未平兄同感,“竹暄”一句之“嬌”與豪氣不太切。
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• 謝清泉兄雅賞, 寫時我對這句也不滿意, 但依韻詩友,還是想盡量保留原韻字多些~。被韻礙住了~~ -Eragon- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/06/2015 postreply 13:06:44
• 謝清泉兄雅賞, 寫時我對這句也不滿意, 但依韻詩友,還是想盡量保留原韻字多些~。被韻礙住了~~ -Eragon- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/06/2015 postreply 13:06:44
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