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• 謝曲師點評。為應元宵節而草就, 您點出的這句我寫時也很不滿意~,而且被“嬌”韻所礙。 說到底還是功夫不夠~。 如不用”嬌“ -Eragon- ♂ (113 bytes) () 03/06/2015 postreply 13:03:14
• 謝曲師點評。為應元宵節而草就, 您點出的這句我寫時也很不滿意~,而且被“嬌”韻所礙。 說到底還是功夫不夠~。 如不用”嬌“ -Eragon- ♂ (113 bytes) () 03/06/2015 postreply 13:03:14
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