冬去春來碧色油,飛花搖葉了君愁。卿卿本是仙鄉住,喜伴東君作一遊。個人感受,僅供您參考.
阿童好!給您拜個早年!好絕清麗雅致,情韻悠長,最喜第三。第二有兩“春”字,轉結似再做點文章,如:
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• 清泉老師折殺阿童了! 給您拜個早年先! 多謝指正,改為 卿卿本在仙鄉住, 嬉戲人間作客遊。:)))) -阿童木牧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2015 postreply 18:30:45
冬去春來碧色油,飛花搖葉了君愁。卿卿本是仙鄉住,喜伴東君作一遊。個人感受,僅供您參考.
• 清泉老師折殺阿童了! 給您拜個早年先! 多謝指正,改為 卿卿本在仙鄉住, 嬉戲人間作客遊。:)))) -阿童木牧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2015 postreply 18:30:45
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