非常喜歡結句。舊憶猶飛葉, 輕風又入樓。輕風改成新風如何?對得更好。
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• 樂公之言對極---新舊嚴格對仗,不過沁文今次放鬆一下^_^欲以"輕"而言思念之輕柔、纖細、飄渺然終不絕。深謝樂公高見。 -沁文----古來客- ♂ (6 bytes) () 10/22/2014 postreply 21:11:11
• 樂公之言對極---新舊嚴格對仗,不過沁文今次放鬆一下^_^欲以"輕"而言思念之輕柔、纖細、飄渺然終不絕。深謝樂公高見。 -沁文----古來客- ♂ (6 bytes) () 10/22/2014 postreply 21:11:11
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