覺得句型單調了些。意很可取。
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• 寒青姐一眼看出不足,深謝!確實是即興寫的,未推敲。還盼您往後多指教! -阿留- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/20/2014 postreply 08:47:53
• 寒青姐一眼看出不足,深謝!確實是即興寫的,未推敲。還盼您往後多指教! -阿留- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/20/2014 postreply 08:47:53
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