蕭風吹落葉,冷氣凝軒牖。
凍結白霜寒,凋敗池邊柳。
石塘再看荷,頸折蓬低首。
昔日好風光,誰知怎能久?
• 慘秋~~~ -白九- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/14/2014 postreply 08:17:38
• 陶兄好詞! -逢緣隨意- ♂ (16 bytes) () 10/14/2014 postreply 08:57:35
• +1,同欣賞! -寒硯- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/14/2014 postreply 09:01:58
• 凍結白霜寒,凋敗池邊柳:樂公此詞端地妙!得點讚一個 -沁文----古來客- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/14/2014 postreply 08:59:28
• 讚! -關中遊子- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/14/2014 postreply 10:16:55
• 留得殘荷聽雨聲,也是一景 -阿方- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/14/2014 postreply 13:56:34
• 冷氣嗖嗖。。。 -momo_sharon- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/14/2014 postreply 14:17:12
• 昔日好風光,誰知怎能久?寫的簡練又廻腸蕩氣! -品羽題紅- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/14/2014 postreply 15:31:28
• 謝謝諸位讀我的拙作。 -樂天陶陶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/14/2014 postreply 15:58:54
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