《事去雲流》
秋風舊曲幾時休
(平平仄仄仄平平)
沁文(古來客)
2014.09.30
秋來令水愁,平平仄仄平(下平十一尤韻:首句入韻)
事去付雲流。仄仄仄平平(下平十一尤韻)
夜靜人追憶,仄仄平平仄
風涼月入樓。平平仄仄平(下平十一尤韻)
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愁:首句末字為 “愁”,故覺似難以實現虛筆,乃索性選取實描而言“事去”、“人追憶”。。。
追:動詞;
憶:名詞,改 “至” 為 “憶” 以求全對仗。
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