時間的玩笑

來源: 蒲公英的家 2014-09-29 18:09:55 [] [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀: 次 (5672 bytes)


你說我是草原上一輪不落的太陽,

很想和我一起騎上駿馬奔馳,

迎著那輪不落的太陽;

我來了,

你在哪裏?


你說我是花園裏一株不起眼的勿忘我,

散發幽香,惹你駐足;

我為你忘記了我自己,

而你,

也忘記了我!


你說我是書架上一本不厚的書,

很想把它讀完,

卻怎麽也讀不完;

我願意為你敞開我的魂靈,

而你,

為何不懂?


你說我是清晨裏一隻愛唱歌的鳥兒,

很想知道它為什麽快樂;

我正想告訴你,

那是因為有你傾聽我歌唱呀,

卻發現,

你已離去!


You said, that I was the unsetting sun on the grassland,

That you wished to gallop with me hand in hand;

Welcoming the unsetting sun,

Here I am,

Where are you in the land?



You said, that I was an unattractive forget-me-not in the flower garden,

That you were mesmerized by the aroma in a sudden,

I forgot myself just for you,

But you,

Forget me you did without being sullen.



You said, that I was a small pamphlet among the tomes on a bookcase,

That you desired to pore over it but never did you cease;

I opened my heart just for you,

But you,

Confounded you were never at peace.



You said, that I was a lovely songbird in the early morning,

That you longed to learn why she has a joyful feeling,

I told you it’s because of my singing you enjoyed,

But you,

Depart you did without returning!


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這首不錯。欣賞 -樂天陶陶- 給 樂天陶陶 發送悄悄話 樂天陶陶 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 09/29/2014 postreply 20:48:37

跟在陶兄後欣賞。 -曲未平- 給 曲未平 發送悄悄話 曲未平 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 09/30/2014 postreply 03:18:31

+2,同賞! -寒硯- 給 寒硯 發送悄悄話 寒硯 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 09/30/2014 postreply 03:40:55

這玩笑開大了;)好清新的詩! -醉狐- 給 醉狐 發送悄悄話 醉狐 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 09/29/2014 postreply 20:56:53

Nicely done on both. But there might be some typos like "I want -逢緣隨意- 給 逢緣隨意 發送悄悄話 逢緣隨意 的博客首頁 (19 bytes) () 09/29/2014 postreply 20:57:12

娓娓道來的濃情蜜意,伴著不料的轉局!對比的情景衝突,令人感歎不已!! -品羽題紅- 給 品羽題紅 發送悄悄話 品羽題紅 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 09/30/2014 postreply 00:17:16

二段的末句,也忘記了我!如改成4個字:已忘記我!這樣就同各段末句都是4個字,都劃一了。 -品羽題紅- 給 品羽題紅 發送悄悄話 品羽題紅 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 09/30/2014 postreply 00:21:24

謝謝建議!已改成:“也忘了我”,這樣就劃一了。 因為我忘了自己,而你又忘我就順理成章成了"也“, 雙重忘記強調忘我的心境? -蒲公英的家- 給 蒲公英的家 發送悄悄話 蒲公英的家 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 09/30/2014 postreply 07:28:44

很優美的詩,中英都好。欣賞! -膠老爺- 給 膠老爺 發送悄悄話 膠老爺 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 09/30/2014 postreply 07:03:19

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