也想不出什麽好字。或者葉脆落池塘。總感到慢字在這兒,味不對,讀來不像舊體詩。不過不改也可,畢竟不少朋友喜歡。
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• 謝曲師費心幫忙斟酌,如您所言,的確有些韻味不對的感覺。 -沁文----古來客- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/28/2014 postreply 15:44:57
• 謝曲師費心幫忙斟酌,如您所言,的確有些韻味不對的感覺。 -沁文----古來客- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/28/2014 postreply 15:44:57
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