上片三四句也可對得更好些,這兩句常常是鷓鴣天見彩之處。
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• 謝謝曲兄,再試試。以後也注意這兩句 -樂天陶陶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2014 postreply 08:56:01
• 謝謝曲兄,再試試。以後也注意這兩句 -樂天陶陶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/21/2014 postreply 08:56:01
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