昨天想說沒說,感到衝字寫漓江不貼切,寫長江可。但我想不出更好的字。尾聯有點掛尾。
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• 正如曲師所言,在這個韻腳中,能選擇得範圍太窄,一開始用了“洶”,感覺更不對;如果整篇換韻腳的話, -momo_sharon- ♀ (24 bytes) () 06/11/2014 postreply 15:08:31
• 正如曲師所言,在這個韻腳中,能選擇得範圍太窄,一開始用了“洶”,感覺更不對;如果整篇換韻腳的話, -momo_sharon- ♀ (24 bytes) () 06/11/2014 postreply 15:08:31
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