謝謝解釋!想看看曲師的建議。很喜歡此詩的意境。
所有跟帖:
• 沒想出好詞。總感到蛙和逸誌音之間反差較大,不好措字。 -曲未平- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/06/2014 postreply 11:40:47
• 再謝未平兄點評,搔到癢處。舊稿翻出,未及細琢,頸聯改作”鼓應心中曲,蛙聽世外音“如何? -清泉水- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/06/2014 postreply 12:03:47
• 沒想出好詞。總感到蛙和逸誌音之間反差較大,不好措字。 -曲未平- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/06/2014 postreply 11:40:47
• 再謝未平兄點評,搔到癢處。舊稿翻出,未及細琢,頸聯改作”鼓應心中曲,蛙聽世外音“如何? -清泉水- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/06/2014 postreply 12:03:47
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