我感到這詩四句都是寫景為主。於意言,染的動詞意味太重,也不及潤蘊藉。愚以為,詩首當求切,次而求巧。不然會弄巧成拙。謝謝商榷。
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• 曲老師解釋精準,沁文心悅誠服。謝指教。 -沁文----古來客- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/15/2014 postreply 09:55:15
• 曲老師句句珠璣,學習了,深謝! -momo_sharon- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/15/2014 postreply 17:18:53
• 曲老師解釋精準,沁文心悅誠服。謝指教。 -沁文----古來客- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/15/2014 postreply 09:55:15
• 曲老師句句珠璣,學習了,深謝! -momo_sharon- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/15/2014 postreply 17:18:53
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