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疑似碎月下寒宮
梨花遍地小桃紅
初起春潮又遇風
更見銀珠天上落
疑似碎月下寒宮
• 學寫七絕 還請師友斧正。 -費嘉- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/04/2014 postreply 10:17:10
• 初起春潮又遇風:甚喜此句! 亦想起唐韋應物之“春潮帶雨晚來急,野渡無人舟自橫” -沁文----古來客- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/04/2014 postreply 10:31:56
• 多謝沁文兄臨貼指點鼓勵。羨慕詩兄博古通今。問周末好! -費嘉- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/04/2014 postreply 11:07:21
• 您謬讚了^_^ 問候費嘉周末好! -沁文----古來客- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/04/2014 postreply 12:33:31
• 喜歡! -yulin_詠溪98- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/04/2014 postreply 10:37:55
• 謝謝臨貼鼓勵!問周末好! -費嘉- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/04/2014 postreply 11:08:10
• 疑似碎月下寒宮。。。周末好! -醉狐- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/04/2014 postreply 11:41:43
• 謝謝醉班鼓勵!也問周末好! -費嘉- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/04/2014 postreply 12:27:58
• 驚疑碎月下寒宮,就是七絕了。 -樂天陶陶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/04/2014 postreply 12:31:07
• +1驚疑碎月下寒宮,就是七絕了~ -Eragon- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/05/2014 postreply 18:44:33
• 疑似碎月下寒宮~~ --問好!(不能跟帖,再 try 一次) -遍野- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/04/2014 postreply 14:55:28
• 多謝樂兄和遍野君雅臨指點鼓勵.問周末好! -費嘉- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/04/2014 postreply 17:51:33
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