謝安靜。我對起句很不滿,剛才連改兩次,覺得稍好點了。結句感覺大了點,準確性不夠。
所有跟帖:
• 從以詩寄意的角度看挺好。 -安靜- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/01/2014 postreply 15:26:50
• 恩。我也是在這兩麵考慮。 -秋橡- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/01/2014 postreply 15:30:39
• 從以詩寄意的角度看挺好。 -安靜- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/01/2014 postreply 15:26:50
• 恩。我也是在這兩麵考慮。 -秋橡- ♂ (0 bytes) () 03/01/2014 postreply 15:30:39
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