愛三段的前五句。後麵三句好像反令詩遜色。僅供參考,俺新詩寫得少。
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• 謝曲師建議。總是想解釋,結果畫蛇添足了。 -叔丁- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2014 postreply 07:03:04
• 謝曲師建議。總是想解釋,結果畫蛇添足了。 -叔丁- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/14/2014 postreply 07:03:04
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