劍外忽傳收薊北 (仄仄仄平平仄仄)
初聞涕淚滿衣裳 (平平仄仄仄平平)
對句毫無要救的跡象,嗬嗬。(“裳”平水韻為平聲)
根本就不拗吧,否則杜老先生這麽嚴謹的人肯定會救滴。
本帖於 2014-01-13 14:19:40 時間, 由普通用戶 nuts000 編輯
劍外忽傳收薊北 (仄仄仄平平仄仄)
初聞涕淚滿衣裳 (平平仄仄仄平平)
對句毫無要救的跡象,嗬嗬。(“裳”平水韻為平聲)
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