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回複:哈哈。俺邀請一幫才子佳人配字畫,見此
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10/30/2013 postreply
06:05:54
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好詩好字畫!但這一首律裏的兩個“倚”字同義有點犯忌了。
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10/30/2013 postreply
06:47:51
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good catch,還是三仄
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10/30/2013 postreply
06:52:40
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回複:good catch,還是三仄
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10/30/2013 postreply
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回複:回複:哈哈。俺邀請一幫才子佳人配字畫,見此
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10/30/2013 postreply
06:47:58
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回複:回複:回複:哈哈。俺邀請一幫才子佳人配字畫,見此
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10/30/2013 postreply
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