• 欣賞:冒昧一次,包涵,多處出律了。請看。。。。。。 -樂天陶陶- ♀ (152 bytes) () 10/07/2013 postreply 20:10:48
• 多謝陶陶潤色,因寫得匆忙,中間有些改動,結果注意了對仗便忘了改平仄,現改如下: -英華- ♀ (336 bytes) () 10/08/2013 postreply 18:28:53
• 好書法! 問好英華! 陶陶君建議的改動不錯。 -ling1984- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/07/2013 postreply 20:43:52
• 謝靈兒妹,改了,看到你們的美唱和很動情,真想跟著動起來,怕是時間緊跟不上了:) -英華- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/08/2013 postreply 18:35:03
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