這組詩很有哲理,譯成英文更有意思。

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回答: 秘密由野水橫木於 2013-09-17 16:31:19

The Other

Only a wayfarer will realize for real
There are so many doors
In the world.

You don't have to be kind to the other.
You just need to stand outside the door
Simply; you are amongst the other.

The Secret

A button closes up the secret of my youth
Shy and immature
Another person unbuttoned it for me
And that guy saw what I'm going to see.

Fishtails

There you stand, in the deep time
A fish swims from a corner of your eyes
Towards me. Yet I don't know
I am the sea.

很有意思。你的詩翻譯成英文讀起來更有詩意。
從中可以看出漢語和英語的某些不同特色。