【憶江南】遊子夢
江南好
杏雨化春風
拂醒天涯遊子夢
蘭舟野渡水流東
極目送飛鴻
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• 蘭舟野渡水流東,極目送飛鴻. -- 佳句!喜歡!~~ -遍野- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/18/2013 postreply 07:18:02
• 第三句還可以改一下,提到樓上。 -萬家述評- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/18/2013 postreply 07:43:01
• 多謝萬師喜歡! 江南啊,每想都很美! 圖是阿童寫完後找到的,萬師的詩更貼切! -阿童木牧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/18/2013 postreply 14:08:17
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