尾聯大好。偶入人間添笑語,好句!坐臥高林豈羨妝,不太切題“茶”,好像是詠壺了。
所有跟帖:
• 謝曲師鼓勵!關於“高林”句。。。 -Hope_Hope- ♂ (532 bytes) () 08/13/2013 postreply 13:40:26
• 欣賞望兄好詩,還長了知識。: ) -阿留- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/13/2013 postreply 17:35:05
• 謝曲師鼓勵!關於“高林”句。。。 -Hope_Hope- ♂ (532 bytes) () 08/13/2013 postreply 13:40:26
• 欣賞望兄好詩,還長了知識。: ) -阿留- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/13/2013 postreply 17:35:05
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