基本同意袖兒說的。不過感覺上片的後麵也是寫得不錯的。
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• 謝謝有緣兄。今早突然想湊一篇湊湊熱鬧,長調不太好寫。 -曲未平- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/10/2013 postreply 11:05:45
• 謝謝有緣兄。今早突然想湊一篇湊湊熱鬧,長調不太好寫。 -曲未平- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/10/2013 postreply 11:05:45
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