跟一個【南鄉子】～～

隨便亂寫，望樓下老師莫怪。。。。

 

門外雪幾堆，   萬裏長空雁一對， 枝上鳥鳴真清脆，友催，  時候又到把家回，

殘陽漸漸退，   夜幕隨後就降垂， 加衣無懼寒風吹，相隨，  使君作陪千秋醉。

 

 【籬笆】

 臨風小樹芽未發，

 嫩枝頂上立餓鴉。

 鄰犬狂吠渾不怕，

 因為牠怕電籬笆。

 

七言第二式： 仄仄平平仄仄平 (第一句仄起、平收)
平平仄仄仄平平 (韻腳) (因為必須押平韻，又要與上一句相對)
平平仄仄平平仄 (因為不入韻，又要與上一句相粘)
仄仄平平仄仄平 (韻腳) (因為必須押平韻，又要與上一句相對)

 電籬笆： Electric fence sensors , dogs can't go through

In the cold winds, the tree in my front yard doesn't seem to have any buds yet. Resting on the  young twigs of the tree are a few hungry crows .  When I am  about to feed the hungry birds, my neighbor's dog was barking at the birds and me like crazy, but we have no fear at all, because the dog itself is afraid of the  electric fences that my neighbor set around her yard to keep him from going through.

所有跟帖： 

• 謝謝。因為牠懼電籬笆。 -樂天陶陶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/11/2013 postreply 14:05:03

• 謝過樂老師指正。周末愉快！：） -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/11/2013 postreply 18:50:44

• 千萬千萬別稱老師，互相學習 -樂天陶陶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/11/2013 postreply 21:11:18